debate

my wonderful Y is taking me camping for my birthday weekend and i will be leaving in about an hour and do not have time to post the remainder of our VIP adventures at the club, but will post it as soon as i get back. is the antisipation killing you yet?? in the mean time i am posting a conversation that Y and i had a while ago about THIS post. I would love to hear any opinions on this..in my favour or not!

me: i just posted a new blog, check it out and tell me what you think

Y: already reading it...

Y: its alright

me: what could make it better?

Y:i dunno, it just lacks emph

me:how can i give it more "emph"

Y:i dunno

me: u suck!

Y: read it again

me: ive read it a few times, thats what i came up with...now i need someone elses opinion

Y: more passion, less gross sexuality

me: i was using the detailed "gross" descriptions for a direct contrast to our profile pic...to show how new we are, that there are all these xxx pics and we are fully clothed in ours. i thought it painted a funny picture.

Y: right...but the way you wrote it, you sound like a shamless cock whore

Y: like your harliquin novels that you read, were they this way?

me: heh...they were much worse. i dont read "harliquin" novels. these books were way more degrading and dirty than this!

Y: i dunno, its your blog...i just thought it should be more classy....but again, its your blog. all i suggest is more passion and desire and emphisis on the unknown and discovery....



Really!? we are having sex with other couples...how classy can this stay??

im curios to see others opinions on this...please discuss!


and just for those of you that want to know, the "harliquin" novels that he was refering to are a trillogy of books called "The Erotic Adventures of Sleeping Beauty" by Anne Rice (under the pen name A N Roquelaure) these are not your run of the mill, man feeling heaving boosom type of erotic novels. i highly recomend them to anyone who wants an erotic, dirty, fetish-filled, painful yet beautiful read.